Student Writing: Then and Now

Last month, the W1 writing project challenged students to incorporate the grammar focus (can/can’t, could/couldn’t, and/but)  into an essay that described five ages (When I was five, …  When I was twelve…, etc.) and finish with the present (Now, I am xxx years old…). They were encouraged to expand with a few details for each of the ages. The writing was done during one hour in class, but prepared by a previous homework assignment to write 10 statements about things they could and couldn’t do when they were children. Shiping Zhang diligently stayed a few minutes after class to complete his essay that blew his teacher, Lynne away when she finally read it.  She was so proud of his work, which required only minimal edits, and wanted to share it with you all. 

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When I was five years old, I could play with my toys in the backyard. It was a quiet place and my grandparents planted many plants there. I liked that backyard. I couldn’t go outside alone and that backyard was my whole world.

When I was ten years old, I was a student. I could study at school and I could play with my friends. I learned a lot from my teachers. I could ride a bicycle around my home town with my friends but I couldn’t ride too far from my home. At that age, my home town was my whole world.

When I was nineteen years old, I went to college. I could leave my hometown and go another city. I made many friends in college, and I went to many cities with my friends but I couldn’t go to other states. My state was my whole world.

When I was twenty-two years old, I went to work, and I went to other states. I saw many different things. I could try many different foods, and knew different cultures but I couldn’t go to another country. My country was my whole world.

When I was twenty-four years old, I came to the USA. I saw more people from different countries, and knew more cultures from other counties. Now I am twenty-seven years old. I still can’t know where I will go in the future but I know I will be better than before, and now the whole world is my world.

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Friendship

Our 2A, 2P, and E2 students thought about and shared what friendship is through their writings. Let’s read a couple of works from them and think of our best friends!

Oksana of 2A

What is a friend? A friend is someone who is a very close person, who feels for me and supports me if I need that. A friend is a person who always wants to speak with me, who is interested in my problems. If people have friends, they feel happy and not alone. I have a few close friends. These people are the best people in my life. 

I am Ukrainian, and my close friends are also from Ukraine. Our friendship began in childhood and continues to this day. In the days of our youth, we spent a lot of time together; we traveled to various interesting places, went to dances, and were constantly in touch. Over the years, each of us got married and had two children. Our friendship has remained as strong as in childhood. We had a beautiful life in Ukraine. But in 2022, war started in my country. It was a terrible day in our lives. I moved to the USA with my children; one friend went to Germany; another went to Poland. For each of us, moving was a difficult decision. In our new countries we had to start life from scratch. The war separated us, but we keep in touch. We often text each other; we call on holidays and birthdays, and together we worry about our Ukraine. Our main dream is to be together again in Ukraine. Unfortunately, I don’t have close friends in the USA. It is very difficult to meet a true friend and it takes time. My real friends are my childhood friends.  

I believe that a person who doesn’t have real friends is unhappy. Each of us has  difficult situations in life. The advice of a friend is of great value at such times. Support, advice, and a kind word are exactly the things you can get only from true friends. I am happy because I have real friends. This is a great gift in my life. 

Qi of 2A

In my view, a friend is someone who takes the initiative to help you when you need help. For me, meeting good friends is like breathing oxygen, and is an antidote to a tiring life. They express their desires freely, can be themselves easily and comfortably, and can also bear some confusion and unhappiness with others. 

I still remember when I first came to the United States. I had no friends and no job. I was alone for a long time. During those days when I had no friends, I felt forgotten by the world and even a little depressed. By chance, I met my first friend in church. We went to church together every Sunday and hung out, ate and chatted together when we were free. She also helped me find my first job. The appearance of friends makes a boring life interesting. My second friend was one I met when I was working in Boston. We worked together for a year. We helped each other during the workdays, talked and laughed every day, and the time passed very quickly. One day at work, my stomach suddenly hurt so much that I couldn’t continue working. She discovered that I was feeling unwell in time and offered to help me complete the remaining work and let me go home to rest. At that moment, she appeared in front of me like a hero, and I was very grateful to have met such a friend. My third friend is my sister and my best friend. We have been together since the moment she was born. As a child she always talked a lot around me, which was annoying. But since I came to the United States, I don’t have the nagging sister around me, and I actually miss her. Fortunately, my sister also came to the United States three years after I did. Her arrival brought me many surprises and touched me. She remembers my birthday and prepares gifts, birthday cakes, and surprises for me. Because of the appearance of friends, life has become better and better, and I am full of expectations for my future. 

We can’t live without friends. Friends are indispensable in our lives. I hope everyone can meet their own friends here, as I have. 

Ebru of E2

When I came to NYC, I met a girl. We shared the same room. We were both alone. She left her mother and I left my daughter in Turkey. We got closer. We started going everywhere together. We were having dinner together. Her name was Blin. She was 20 years old. She was a very beautiful girl. She was very mature, understanding, cute, kind and respectful. We shared interests and overcame challenges together and learned from each other along the way. As our bond grew stronger, we discovered the true meaning of companionship. 

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Your Story, Our Story with Tenement Museum

Our University Settlement students are studying level 1 English as a Second Language at the Eldridge Street location.  They commit to a ten-month language immersion class that meets every Saturday and Sunday morning for three hours. Most have been in the country less than one year. Some are married with young children.  Most have studied in college in their home country, and some have completed a bachelor’s degree. In addition to attending school and caring for their families, they hold full and part-time jobs.  As their English improves, they will be able to pursue more lucrative careers. 

Your Story, Our Story features objects that tell personal stories of American immigration and migration.

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These are a Few of Our Favorite Things

Last month, Naima’s students wrote about their favorite things. They share their favorite books, movies, songs, New York City landmarks and more! Read more about the things that makes them happy. Share in the comments below – What’s your favorite place in New York City?

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Farewell to Professor June

For 20 years, Professor June Foley, who is the Senior Director of the Writing Program at NYU Gallatin, has been teaching an advanced writing class here at University Settlement. June has also been responsible for the editing and publishing of the Literacy Review, an annual collection of writing from adult education students throughout NYC. A new compilation of writing from University Settlement students, 20!, will be released soon and Friday, August 26, will be her last day leading her class. We sat down to talk with her about the past, the present, and the future.

Tell us a little about yourself…

I was born and raised in Trenton, New Jersey, into a working-class family, in what sociologists have called an “urban village.” I was the first of an eventual 40 first cousins, with dozens of relatives living within a couple of miles. I received my M.A. and Ph.D. in English and American Literature from NYU. My husband, Bob Stark (a native New Yorker) and I have been together for 38 years, and I have a 50-year-old son, Max Lindenman, from a previous marriage.

How did you first get involved with University Settlement and whose idea was it to start the writing class?

As the new Writing Program director, I was asked by the Writing Program chair to audit the first “Literacy in Action” (now “Race, Social Justice, and Adult Literacy”) class. The “volunteer work” the six students and two auditing faculty did was all at our first partner—University Settlement. Everyone else taught conversation, but I chose to teach writing. And I’ve been doing it ever since. 

Can you describe the format of the writing class?

Though I facilitate the class, with two Gallatin undergrad student teachers, the class is student-centered. The students write on any topic, in any genre. The student teachers and I edit the works (minimally), each writer reads her work aloud during class, and the other students offer comments about both the content and the style. The students are inspired and encouraged by one another. 

Any special memories of the writing class? Any memorable students?

To tell my special memories of the class, I’d have to write a book. Instead, I’ll quote from my introduction to 20!, our new book. In my introduction to one volume, I noted that almost all the original students came from China and many had survived Mao Zedong’s Cultural Revolution. Lisa Lee wrote that when she was growing up, many neighbors were so poor that “they sold their children to the rich”; Yuqing Gu wrote about being ordered, as a physician, to perform a forced abortion on a woman eight months pregnant because neighbors had informed the authorities that she already had one child; Biming Long remembered the Communist Party labeling a beloved teacher a traitor, hounding him into suicide. Many stories set in New York City described working many hours every week in sweatshops or restaurants. Nelson Feng described how his restaurant delivery bike was stolen, he was threatened with a gun, and a customer whose dinner cost $57.75 tipped him 25 cents.

There was joyful writing, as well: Ofelio Chen’s about his “first friend,” a calf on his family farm in China; John Cheng’s about meeting his father in New York City, after running away from home many years earlier in China; Wen Fei Liang’s whirlwind trip to Europe, using her wheelchair; David Chen’s about receiving two unjust summonses as a mini-pancake sidewalk vendor, writing careful descriptions of the experience, reading them in court, and having the summonses dismissed.

Over time, the class became increasingly diverse, with students from Latin America, the Middle East, Africa, and Eastern and Western Europe, and the writing also became more varied. Jackie Leduc’s brilliant introduction to the previous compilation, Remember, mentions the political issues of Bangladesh, passionately discussed by Afroza Yasmin and her son, Mahir Rahman; and the complex, frequently dark stories of the Brazilians Marilia Valengo, Vini de la Rocha and his wife Mariana Lemos Duarte. This year, we read Jennifer Alonzo’s love letter to her husband; Gabriela Robles’s story from the point of view of a Central Park bench; Annette Huang’s exhortations toward love and compassion; Grace Zhang’s writing about neighborhood tensions in Brooklyn; Fatima Sore’s fictionalized tales of women’s lives on the Ivory Coast, and much more.  

Did you learn anything from your students?

Again, I could write a book. As I also say in my intro, they’ve taught me much more than I’ve taught them. I’m in awe of their intelligence, thoughtfulness, courage, resourcefulness, resilience, patience, determination, compassion–and their writing talent. 

Can you describe the genesis of the Literacy Review?

LR started after I compiled that first little book of USS writing. The students were so thrilled to see their words in print that my class expanded. Soon I asked a few Gallatin students if they’d like to get together to create a book of the best writing from all NYC ESOL and adult education students. 

What are some important things all writers should remember?

The writer Henry James said, “Observe perpetually.” In addition, I’d say never stop reflecting, reading, and writing. 

What do you plan to do now?

I’ll be teaching one Gallatin course per semester in my field, the Victorian novel, at least for a year. 

Who will take over the writing class and Literacy Review?

Allyson Paty, a graduate of Gallatin who has an MFA in poetry from NYU and has been the Writing Program associate director for a number of years, will succeed me as WP director on September 1st. Corinne Butta, who was the WP’s graduate assistant for two years, received her M.A. from Gallatin in May, and has experience as an editor, will take over the advanced writing class. They are terrific!

Anything else you’d like to add?

Many, many thanks to the director of the Adult Literacy Program, Lucian Leung; to Jon, the assistant director; and to Leanne Fung, program associate. You have all been so wonderfully supportive over the years. I’m honored to have had the opportunity to work with you at University Settlement. 

Thank you, June! We’ll miss you!

To check out past blog posts about June, the writing class, and the Literacy Review, click here!

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HAVING COME HERE, I AM NO LONGER THERE

We would like to share what some E2 students think about New York City and how their life was before coming to the city. Let’s see if there is something new to you or something you can relate.

Jose – I was born in Huelva, Andalucía, Spain, a coastal city near Portugal. I grew up in a small fishing village called Passages San Juan, in the Basque Country, in the north of Spain. You may know it as a Pasay Donibane in Euskera, the language from the Basque Country. I grew up with my aunt, my uncle and their son, my cousin Jose Angel. What more should I say? What else can I tell you?

When I was a child, I studied in elementary school. After that, I went to Technical School. When I finished studying, I started my professional career as a milling turner when I was 18––should I tell you how long? I can just say it was a long time. I am not 21. 

I was in the USA twice before I came to New York City. Before this, I first came to Miami, La Florida, in 2004. Then (there) I visited Hialeah. I visited Coral Gables. I went to South Beach in Miami Beach. In my second travel to the United States, I met Saint Charles, Missouri where I visited the Daniel Boone Farm. Finally, in September 2018, I came to New York looking for my American dream.

I came to the US because in Spain after the 2008 economic crisis my wife and I had a complicated personal situation, and we needed some change.

After arriving in America, I had three different impressions of America, but I am going to tell you about my New Yorker experience.  That is what I am, a New Yorker. My teacher is right.

My idea about New York City was very different from what New York City really is. I waited to see a cleaner and more modern city, but no. It has some things that I think in a city like New York should not exist. It is a dirty city, and for example, the train and their stations are very old, decrepit. It does not work well for a modern city, not like everybody hopes for New York City. 

But don’t ask me why it is a city that I love more every day. It is like a brother who is always doing stupid things, but only you can say that your brother is stupid. If somebody says your brother is stupid, you always defend him. New York City is the same. It is a horrible city, but it is the best horrible city in the world, my world. 

I have lived in New York with my wife since I arrived in the city. My family and friends are all of them in Spain. I miss a lot of them, especially my father and some close friends. When I arrived in the United States, I spoke with them all day by WhatsApp, and once a week, we held a video conference by WhatsApp, Skype or Zoom. 

I have a family group in WhatsApp, and some group with some friends from different ages of my life and, we “speak” regularly, writing and recording messages and sending memes, pictures, and videos. When we need to speak about serious thoughts, we speak by video conference. Es todo. Or, like the American cartoon pig, “That’s all, folks.”

Olga – I was born in the sunny European country of Moldova, in the small town of Lipcani, which borders Romania and Ukraine. I grew up in a wonderful and happy family. My mother was a strict, but a very loving and caring women. My father is a police captain, the kindest person on earth, and my younger, beautiful, and smart sister. 

In 1990, I went to first grade and finished 11th grade in 2001, those were happy school years. After school, I went to Ukraine to the city of Chernivtsi, went to a college of electrical engineering. After college, I entered university (“Nonconventional energy sources”). After my undergraduate studies, I completed a master’s degree and successfully graduated. At the same time, I studied at the magistracy and worked at a big energy company. 

I arrived in the USA in October 2016. An army friend of my husband invited us to visit him in NY. My first impression of NY was not particularly good; too many ugly buildings, too many small apartments, too many rats; too much garbage and litter, too many very rude and disrespectful people. I was shocked.

On the first day I went to the ocean, to the sun, sand and waves––it was wonderful! New York autumn is amazing! When I visited Manhattan, everything changed, really the heart of New York! I love sunsets and sunrises in this city. I love the noise of the city.

I have been in neighboring states, and I liked most things very much. I have seen many beautiful things and places. I like people who do what they want to do, no matter how they dress, live, relax, work. But there is something that I cannot and do not want to understand, especially on trains, when girls, pregnant women, parents with small children, either looking at the phone, or listening to something, and pretend not to notice other people. Many people in New York City are very rude, very loud, very toxic. No excuses––no. 

I live in Brooklyn with my husband. Some of my acquaintances and friends with whom I grew up are in America, but in other states. Of course we call up each other or correspond with one another in other ways. My best school friends are also abroad. Life has scattered us all around the world. It is difficult to be without relatives, your children, and parents. But I always hope for the best, and God willing, we will all be reunited.

Every day, several times a day, we talk on the phone, video chat . . . still this is not enough. I really want to hug my children, warm them with my body, inhale their scent, and hear their sonorous laughter every minute. Talking about this has made me sad.

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Memorable & Dream Vacations 2

This time we would like to share 2 other W1 students’ writings. They were very good and funny students always not sitting together to practice English with other students even though they are a married couple. Their sense of humor exudes through their writings, too. Enjoy!

Nikolay’s Memorable Vacation – In the past I went to Paris with my wife, we had a great time! There was amazing breakfast and I visited the Eiffel tower. However, I stood in the longest line of my life to get to the top. The view was not incredible, and the best place on top of the Eiffel Tower was the restroom. It was interesting to know that the architect of the tower had an apartment on top. I think this is really the most expensive apartment in Paris. And after this experience we got on Hop-on-Hop-off bus and after a long day, we got a text message that because of a strike, our tickets to Barcelona were canceled. Overall, I think we can go to Paris again, but plan to spend more time because there could be strikes again. It’s a good place to spend time.

Nikolay’s Dream Vacation – In my dream vacation I want to go alone to Utqiagvik, Alaska from November until March. I will stay alone and order delivery of pizza and soda every day, once a day and then sleep during the long long arctic night. When I wake up it will be frozen pizza and soda behind the door and I will fall asleep again and again, until the end of the vacation. If it will be good, maybe I will repeat it again next year or move to Antarctica to do the same there. Maybe I will have new dreams…

Yulia’s Memorable Vacation – My husband and I went to three countries in spring about 5 years ago. The first country was the city Riga in Latvia. We walked on the oldest street and looked at the oldest architecture. The second country was the city of Paris in France. We went to the Eiffel Tower and took a tour on the bus. The third country was Barcelona in Spain. We celebrated my husband’s birthday. In Barcelona city I lost my phone 󰣺 , but some nice Spanish guys found it and gave me my phone back. That vacation was really magical and I’ll never forget it! ☀

Yulia’s Dream Vacation – I know that my husband wants to be on vacation alone, but on my dream vacation we will be together ❤ . My dream vacation is to travel around the world on different modes of transport. We will visit interesting, beautiful and memorable places in the USA, Europe and Asia. We will spend 3-5 days in each place. I would like to try cuisines in every country, and swim in different oceans. It’s just a dream. Today my dream is to have just ONE vacation! ☀

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